WRITING IN WHAKAPONO 20

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We are writing about Expositions; which means we show the title; Overview of our righting; the argument of our writing and then the conclusion.
We were given an example of one from our teacher.

Title:
Eating Vegetables

Overview:
Most children have to eat
Vegetables. I don’t think this
is right.
Arguments:
Lots of vegetables taste horrible. They can make us feel sick.
Some children cry when they have to eat them. Crying makes
Your eyes sore. We should be able to eat what we like.
Cakes and lollies are much better. Our teeth
might get holes and fall out. If they fall out, we
can get new ones. Lions and tigers don’t eat
vegetables. They are strong and they can run
fast.
Conclusion:
Children MUST eat what they want. They
should not have to eat yucky vegetables.


We are learning that the OVERVIEW - states the topic and the writer's point of view
ARGUMENTS - are supporting the writer's opinion about what should happen
with the CONCLUSION - restating of the writer's opinion.

The controlling words are: should & must










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