WEEK 4 WRITING

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Learning Objectives Students will select an issue that they care about and craft a persuasive letter around that topic

We have been working on building our paragraphs to form better stories. 
Building our brainstorm with the topics that they have chosen. We are writing a persuasive letter. This letter needs to have the issue, audience, what we want the audience to do…
They are to form a HOOK using 2-3 sentences to explain what they want done. 
Researching the Ministry of the AREA. 

PRODUCT of work will be published next week.
Check out some of the children's work... Publish pieces will be done next week...













Enjoy the beginning of their writing work.

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